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My Little Glass Doll

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I remember her vividly.
We would flirt on occasion,
but we were just friends.
She had a wonderful laugh,
and a beautiful smile.
I was ugly,
in the full swing of teenage acne.
But her skin was smooth,
white, like a glass doll.
Perfect.

the first time I saw
the bright red slashes
across that flawless arm.
It scared me.

My raven haired doll,
hurting her self.
I couldn't believe it.
She said it made her feel good.
I couldn't imagine how

I was going to ask her
why she would
flaw her perfect form.
But that was the day
my innocence was shattered,
Like a little glass doll.
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I DO NOT KNOW A GIRL WHO KILLED HERSELF.

I do know a girl who cuts her self (I know several of those). I remembered one of them, a good friend of mine, and how scared it made me feel to see her hurt like that. I added the last part on there because it sort of felt right.


EDIT: I added a bit more and made some better breaks in it. Tell me what you think.

EDIT: took out a whole stanza's worth. Was just bulk.
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Always surprises anyone...no matter who it is